A Request Letter


Tiwat Laoboonchai
2/13 Bangkok-non 33
Soi Telrawat, BKK THB 10800

Punn Tantakool
Anantasila Resorts Manager
Anantasila Resorts
Takiab, Huahin 10300

December 9, 2010

Dear Mr. Punn:
For this coming Christmas and New Year, me and my family are planning to set off and relax at Anantasila resort from the recommendation of my friends.

I would like to request for a family room for 5 with 2 bedrooms and a small living room plus a scenic sea view at the lowest possible rate. I would like to know about the resot’s facility and specific things for two –year old brother and 80 year old grandmother.

I’ve deposit 1,000.00 baht check in this letter as the requirement. Please replied or send the information back to us as soon as possible, in order for me and my family to decide. If you have any question please contact me (333)


Thank you for your corporation and assistant


Enclosures
 

Tiwat Laoboonchai
TC

Complaint Letter


Tiwat Laoboonchai
2/13 Bangkok-Nun 33
Soi Telwarat, Bangsue
BKK, Thailand 10800

November 26, 2010

Customer Service Manager
Nike Corporation
236 Oxford St, LONDON W1C 1DE

Dear Customer Service Manager:
       On October 23, 2010 I’ve purchased the new Nike Air Max shoe from Nike Town, in the amount of £75, where I have the receipt bill as a proven.
           After I’ve purchase it, I found that there were some death rats inside the box and the shoe laces were old and pale. I have taken a picture of the shoe I bought and the bill receipt to verify that I’ve purchased it from Nike Town at London on October 23, 2010
            I would like to have an exchange of the product into a new one or either an immediate refund of the price I’ve paid it. If you have require any additional information please contact me at 110-21345

Thank you for your corporation and assistant.
Sincerely,
 

Tiwat Laoboonchai 

Persuasive Essay: Evaluating Ads


        The Spirit of Bacardi”, is what everybody knows from the famous alcoholic brand. However, many people ignore the advertisement of the product. The purpose of this essay is to give the analysis of Bacardi advertisement that is found in a magazine. The purpose of advertising is to sell the product to customers, who are adults or teenager over the age of eighteen. The advertisement use black color as the background with the picture of Bacardi bottle in the middle of the page.  Beneath the bottle there is a brief history of Bacardi. The picture of the original Bacardi distillery and Don Facunto Bacardi, the founder of Bacardi are beside the bottle. After the advertisement has been drawn out, it seems to validate that it has made the effective form of persuasive due to appearances of the positive aspects.
        The positive aspects of the advertisement are categorized into repetition, composition and association. The repetition appears in this advertisement, when the word Bacardi is being reiterated more than twice. This process is being done to ensure the customer that Bacardi is suitable alcoholic for them to choose. The compositions of this advertisement are formal English language and dark color as a background. The usage of formal English appears when the advertisement is explaining the brief history, where everyone can understand it clearly.  The dark background represents the appearance of the product to look more exalted and sophisticated, where it lures the rich customers to buy the product. The last aspect of this advertisement is association. It links with Bacardi’s official website and links with “drinkaware.co.uk,” to shows the customers that the product is safety and reliable. Overall the advertisement is a snob appeal, where it makes the audience think that it is a luxury product.
       Now let’s twist to the other side of the advertisement, or the negative aspect. The negative aspects in this advertisement are categorized into omission and diversion. The omission of this advertisement is the ignorance of the price and the warning. As everybody knows the alcohol is not legal for adolescent under 18 and too much of it could make people sick or gets drunk. This information is important for people to understand, so they shouldn’t omit them. the diversion of this advertisement appear when the statement, “the world’s first premium aged with rums” is emphasized. This little statement makes the customer to ignore the disadvantage of alcohol and more eager to taste or buy the world’s first premium aged with rums. Therefore, these following aspects give the negative side of the product.        
       In conclusion, the advertisement has the effective form of persuasion because it is strengthen at composition and association to show that the product is apt for the adults. Even though, it omits some of the vital information, but still it is an effective form of persuasion without any recommendation on the changes of this advertisement.      
        
Done by: Tew

Losing Weight (edited version)


         Have you ever thought that you are fat or has someone said that you are fat? If so, it is best for you to start losing weight. People usually get fat because they have been becoming more idle and taking in large amount of foods than they should. Gaining too much weight can create diseases to the body such as diabetes, cancer and an increase risk of heart attack. Therefore, it is important to start losing weight by adjusting your daily life schedule.
               To start losing weight, first you need to limit or ban certain food you have taken. People get fat easily by eating too much and letting their indulgence overtake themselves. The foods that need to be reduced are junk foods such as chocolate, cake, fast foods or anything that has high amounts of calories. These foods contain calories, which will make your body get thicker, which means you will gain more weight.  Reducing too much of these foods usually leads to an easy relapse, according to healthcare.com
          The second solution to lose weight is eating the right foods.  The right foods should contain protein, vitamins or anything which has a low amount of calories. These nutrients are found in fresh meats, fish, vegetables and fruits, according to healthcastle.com. Therefore eating the right foods helps you to lose weight.            
       The third solution to lose weight is to exercise. Exercising involves muscle and body movement, which means you are using your body actively. Every time you play or exercise, you are burning calories, which means your weight is decreasing. The simplest way to start burning calories is to jog at least 15 to 30 minutes per day or to play sports with your friends. Therefore, doing exercise will help you to lose weight.
      The solution that will not work to lose weight is to eat more junk foods than eating foods containing vitamins. The best solution is to lose weight is exercising because it helps to burn calories faster and it is enjoyable. The benefit of losing weights in this essay is that it will help you to organize things in your life and to win over the indulgence. Another benefit of losing weight is to getting healthy and having small chance of getting any harmful diseases. These solutions are perfect because it is suitable to anybody at any age.    

Sources:
Tsang, Gloria. (2009, September). 10 tips for easy weight loss. Retrieved from htttp://www.healthcastle.com/easy-weightloss.shtml

Losing Weight


         Have you ever think that you’re fat or someone said that you are fat? If so, it is best for you to start losing weight. People usually get fat because they have been getting more idly and taking in large amount of foods than they should. Getting too much weight would create harmful diseases to the body such as diabetes, cancer and heart attack. Therefore, it is important to start losing weight by adjusting your daily life schedule.
               To start losing weight, first you need to limit or ban the certain of food you’ve taken. People get fat easily by eating too much and letting their indulgence take over themselves. The foods that needed to be reduced are junk foods such as chocolate, cake, fast foods or anything that has high amount of calories. These foods contain calories, where it will make your body getting thicker, which means you will gain more weight.  Reducing too much of these foods usually lead to an easy relapse, according to healthcare.com
          The second solution to lose weight is eating the right foods.  The right foods should contain protein, vitamin or anything which has a low amount of calories. These nutrients are found in a fresh meats, fish, vegetable and fruit stated by healthcastle.com. Therefore taking right foods help you to lose weight.            
       The third solution to lose weight is to exercise. Exercising involves muscle and body movement, which means you are using your body astutely. Every time you play or exercise, your calories are burning, which means your weight is minimizing.  The simplest way to start burning calories is to jog at least 15 to 30 minutes per day or playing sports with your friends. Therefore, doing exercise will help you to lose weight.
      The solution that will not work to lose weight is eating more junk foods than eating foods contain vitamins. The best solution is to lose weight because it helps to burn calories faster and it is enjoyable.  The benefit of losing weights in this essay will help you to organize things in your life and winning over the indulgence. Another beneficial of losing weight is to get healthy and to have a small chance of getting any harmful diseases. These solutions are perfect because it is suitable to anybody at any particular ages.    

Sources:
Tsang, Gloria. (2009, September). 10 tips for easy weight loss. Retrieved from htttp://www.healthcastle.com/easy-weightloss.shtml

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